A Mind Explosion! ! ! Poem by Geoff Warden
A Mind Explosion! ! !
Me Mistress has made the call
an' I must answer her need
a game of silly entrapment
as slowly I caress every key
She a wonder of merriment
knowing each button to push
has set thy hands a whirling
thy mindset true explosion
I do feel my mistress has missed
the soft way I touch her so deep
the truth behind my invoked mind
she listens to my soul weep
though comment and vote may count
none compare to my mistress' allure
'or long into night she fills delight
echoed on pages for evermore
Hi Geoff, Very different poem. Maybe she doesn't understand you. Maybe you should speak it out with her. I guess I am not one to give advice right now. Take care Excellent Poem.
Like the closing lines of this Geoff, echoed on pages forevermore. That's the beauty of poetry, it captures every thought, good or bad, one only has to read this and know what you're thinking! Great write. HG: -)
Are you trying to say, that your mistress nag is more important that what your readers (fans) has to say... in admiring your art? heh. Fine then. What a lucky mistress: D
Another great write. Nicely done. You said so much but in a tasteful manner. Keep writing!
Beautiful write Geoff! A romance poem that says so much...but tastefully! ((smile)) Great job once again on another wonderful piece of poetry....Great title and imagery. U R so good at this....keep it up ='} =Shelley=
Mistresses are extremely powerful... as i need not tell you geoff... x
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/4/2024 6:19:15 PM # 1.0.0
Mind and body explosion should be the title! Splendid!