A New Day Poem by Antonio Liao

A New Day

Rating: 5.0


almost it ended, before it started, when all
what is given is losing its grip, the journey
becomes a hoax to survive

take all the chances to pursue what is
being started, for it is just a beginning of
what is a new day for all of us

it is always the inner voice, which is stronger
than what you see in your naked eyes, all
the way your passion carried out your
pleasure to remember that maturity is but
a wonderful experienced of what is life

this comfort zone, tells us the intriguing story
where and what life has reach to know more
of what is self redeeming, knowing that the
past reveals and controls everything life
exposes to the real you

a new day has elude my fears, a choice that
today anything that seen and what it comes
has consume my illusion, and now I am in
control of what I wanted in life, a new day has
come to witness the true in me to you

I am in you and you are in me, in this garden of
life, a reveling truth that a new day has started
to sprout in our lives

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naseer Ahmed Nasir 10 March 2009

Beautiful poem.....An internal monologue.....A new person and a new beginning is emerging from a new day. The simpilicity of the structure and the contents is its beauty...... A simple 10. Regards Naseer

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 November 2009

am in you and you are in me, in this garden of life, a reveling truth that a new day has started to sprout in our lives...........................life is not hoax and it will go on. new day with new brgining thatis way of life to be lived on... bautiful write and appriciable....10 read mine.. i am disgrace...goback.... pulled from deep sleep

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Rachel Butler 28 October 2009

'A new day has come to witness the true in me to you' Rachel Ann Butler

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Yelena M. 17 June 2009

Everything is connected in this world..the new dawn brings new hope to all of us...Thanks for sharing this lovely poem.10+++ Best wishes. A.

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a awakening write...a 'you' in 'me' and a me in you...lovely poem i take this into my favs

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Ashraful Musaddeq 04 May 2009

A nice poem with nice ending.

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