A Pair Of Sparrows Comments
You peck and peck at it
Your tired beak in vain,
Come, O pair of sparrows,
Let me the truth of it explain.
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Out of a simple image you made an extaordinary poem! Excellent!
Thanks dear poet, yes, there is a lot of poetry in day-to-day life.
Get not mad at your own image, Let not your energies drain, What you see is no rival, Watch not in mirror in disdain....absolutely wonderful sir......A brilliant poem....10++++
Thanks, a compliment coming from a poet like you does go a long way.
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12/6/2025 8:14:34 AM # 1.0.0
I've seen many in this world vain In pursuit of the feign, And getting no matching gain, Chase the vain and incur pain...................... Besides the surface meaning, there is a deeper layer of meaning and I am drawn to it! How many of us like the sparrows fight with imaginary enemies and drain all our energies! A lovely poem, beautifully rhyming and containing profound thoughts. A sure 10
I'm glad you also saw the deeper layer as you call it.