A Paradigm Shift Comments

'paradigm shift' as a phrase is very much becoming a cliche this poem placed it back into its depth

To write in Peter Beagle's wordings 'Heroes know that things must happen When it is time for them to happen. A quest may not simply be abandoned; Unicorns may go unrescued for a long time, But not forever; A happy ending cannot come In the middle of the story.” A shift is a must You may call it 'A Paradigm Shift' In fulfilling a quest. Very nice one. Enjoyed.

Such a masterful use of language, entwining imagery w/ rhetoric and producing a fine tapestry of mood. Great work.

My secret search of dream in the corridor of quest -like this line. I like the style of the poem, the way it was written, interesting.

I too am addicted to the eclectic sensuality abounding in all domains! We were born in the same year - though worlds apart, so close at heart, poets rule! May Peace Prevail On Earth

An excellent pattern distribution.... Hurriedly streaming may relate to the exponential growth of every new breath given.... One Peace at a Time... Deana

a great write.....you master at your wrk........and i think i m kindda falling for ur poems..... lol........ a gud write......... regards dolly