A Passion To Live Poem by Jeanette Telusma

Not one single concrete image. All abstractions and generalities. All telling and no showing. I'm not really convinced when there are no observations except the thoughts that float in the head ungrounded.

The present is what you should pursue. You should pursue it as if it was your last. Make it count and leave a lasting legacy behind. A lasting legacy that tells the world You possess a passion to live. you hve a great passion to lilve. to ny

Yes, there is today because yesterday is gone. Yesterday is gone therefore today is in the present. The present is what you should pursue. Very fine expression...dear poetess..

The present is what you should pursue. You should pursue it as if it was your last. live in the present and strive hard to achieve your set goals., very nice poem of motivation. tony

Great lines! A work of an intricate mind, written with clarity of thought in persuasive expressions. Thanks for sharing Jeanette and do remain enriched.

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