A Peaceful Place Poem by Kevin Mabey

A Peaceful Place

Rating: 4.2


A PEACEFUL PLACE

A place of serenity and harmony,
A place of being one with nature.
A green and vibrant land.
A wooded area with lots of animals.

A giving back spot, when it gives to us.
A sacred spot, a spot going between good and evil.
A wonderful and glorious spot to call upon your spiritual side for help.

As you walk deeper in the thick woods, you came across a midnight adobe dome object.
As you get closer you notice a normal door in it, you notice it had no windows or a smoke hole.
As you were looking around you saw a beautiful clear blue lake about 20 feet away from the midnight adobe dome.

As you were alone for miles, you had no shelter so you went inside.
As you went into the unknown of the midnight adobe dome, you knew you needed light to see by.
As you found a hole in the middle, you found some wood and began to assemble the wood.

As you were able to start a fire.
As the fire was going, it became very hot; you were looking around and noticed no water or food.
As you were in it, you felt a little bit wet.
Later on you were getting very hot, you didn't realize the time.

As you started to relax and get comfortable
As you were seeing a glorious war within your soul,
As your body was going through changes,
As your mind was racing.
As many things were happening all at once.

As you were more than comfortable
As you relaxed it got more intense.
You called out for guidance and projection.
As the hours that you were there, started to turn into days.

As your ancestors' spirits and spirits of the animal friends start to show you the future.
You looked around and still no light in the midnight adobe.
As it was still hot even thou you had no fire.
As the spirits of good won over evil.

As it has been three long days since you went in the midnight adobe dome,
As you feel ready to come out and face the world, but before you do,
You go take a swim in the clear blue lake,
After that you lay on the grass of the lake and dried off by the sun's rays.

As you had a wonderful time, now you decide to go back to life in the world of tall skyscrapers,
And smoke and pollution, even through you would like to stay.
You head down from your harmony and peaceful place.


A PEACEFUL PLACE

A place of serenity and harmony,
A place of being one with nature.
A green and vibrant land.
A wooded area with lots of animals.

A giving back spot, when it gives to us.
A sacred spot, a spot going between good and evil.
A wonderful and glorious spot to call upon your spiritual side for help.

As you walk deeper in the thick woods, you came across a midnight adobe dome object.
As you get closer you notice a normal door in it, you notice it had no windows or a smoke hole.
As you were looking around you saw a beautiful clear blue lake about 20 feet away from the midnight adobe dome.

As you were alone for miles, you had no shelter so you went inside.
As you went into the unknown of the midnight adobe dome, you knew you needed light to see by.
As you found a hole in the middle, you found some wood and began to assemble the wood.

As you were able to start a fire.
As the fire was going, it became very hot; you were looking around and noticed no water or food.
As you were in it, you felt a little bit wet.
Later on you were getting very hot, you didn't realize the time.

As you started to relax and get comfortable
As you were seeing a glorious war within your soul,
As your body was going through changes,
As your mind was racing.
As many things were happening all at once.

As you were more than comfortable
As you relaxed it got more intense.
You called out for guidance and projection.
As the hours that you were there, started to turn into days.

As your ancestors' spirits and spirits of the animal friends start to show you the future.
You looked around and still no light in the midnight adobe.
As it was still hot even thou you had no fire.
As the spirits of good won over evil.

As it has been three long days since you went in the midnight adobe dome,
As you feel ready to come out and face the world, but before you do,
You go take a swim in the clear blue lake,
After that you lay on the grass of the lake and dried off by the sun's rays.

As you had a wonderful time, now you decide to go back to life in the world of tall skyscrapers,
And smoke and pollution, even through you would like to stay.
You head down from your harmony and peaceful place.


A PEACEFUL PLACE

A place of serenity and harmony,
A place of being one with nature.
A green and vibrant land.
A wooded area with lots of animals.

A giving back spot, when it gives to us.
A sacred spot, a spot going between good and evil.
A wonderful and glorious spot to call upon your spiritual side for help.

As you walk deeper in the thick woods, you came across a midnight adobe dome object.
As you get closer you notice a normal door in it, you notice it had no windows or a smoke hole.
As you were looking around you saw a beautiful clear blue lake about 20 feet away from the midnight adobe dome.

As you were alone for miles, you had no shelter so you went inside.
As you went into the unknown of the midnight adobe dome, you knew you needed light to see by.
As you found a hole in the middle, you found some wood and began to assemble the wood.

As you were able to start a fire.
As the fire was going, it became very hot; you were looking around and noticed no water or food.
As you were in it, you felt a little bit wet.
Later on you were getting very hot, you didn't realize the time.

As you started to relax and get comfortable
As you were seeing a glorious war within your soul,
As your body was going through changes,
As your mind was racing.
As many things were happening all at once.

As you were more than comfortable
As you relaxed it got more intense.
You called out for guidance and projection.
As the hours that you were there, started to turn into days.

As your ancestors' spirits and spirits of the animal friends start to show you the future.
You looked around and still no light in the midnight adobe.
As it was still hot even thou you had no fire.
As the spirits of good won over evil.

As it has been three long days since you went in the midnight adobe dome,
As you feel ready to come out and face the world, but before you do,
You go take a swim in the clear blue lake,
After that you lay on the grass of the lake and dried off by the sun's rays.

As you had a wonderful time, now you decide to go back to life in the world of tall skyscrapers,
And smoke and pollution, even through you would like to stay.
You head down from your harmony and peaceful place.


A PEACEFUL PLACE

A place of serenity and harmony,
A place of being one with nature.
A green and vibrant land.
A wooded area with lots of animals.

A giving back spot, when it gives to us.
A sacred spot, a spot going between good and evil.
A wonderful and glorious spot to call upon your spiritual side for help.

As you walk deeper in the thick woods, you came across a midnight adobe dome object.
As you get closer you notice a normal door in it, you notice it had no windows or a smoke hole.
As you were looking around you saw a beautiful clear blue lake about 20 feet away from the midnight adobe dome.

As you were alone for miles, you had no shelter so you went inside.
As you went into the unknown of the midnight adobe dome, you knew you needed light to see by.
As you found a hole in the middle, you found some wood and began to assemble the wood.

As you were able to start a fire.
As the fire was going, it became very hot; you were looking around and noticed no water or food.
As you were in it, you felt a little bit wet.
Later on you were getting very hot, you didn't realize the time.

As you started to relax and get comfortable
As you were seeing a glorious war within your soul,
As your body was going through changes,
As your mind was racing.
As many things were happening all at once.

As you were more than comfortable
As you relaxed it got more intense.
You called out for guidance and projection.
As the hours that you were there, started to turn into days.

As your ancestors' spirits and spirits of the animal friends start to show you the future.
You looked around and still no light in the midnight adobe.
As it was still hot even thou you had no fire.
As the spirits of good won over evil.

As it has been three long days since you went in the midnight adobe dome,
As you feel ready to come out and face the world, but before you do,
You go take a swim in the clear blue lake,
After that you lay on the grass of the lake and dried off by the sun's rays.

As you had a wonderful time, now you decide to go back to life in the world of tall skyscrapers,
And smoke and pollution, even through you would like to stay.
You head down from your harmony and peaceful place.


A PEACEFUL PLACE

A place of serenity and harmony,
A place of being one with nature.
A green and vibrant land.
A wooded area with lots of animals.

A giving back spot, when it gives to us.
A sacred spot, a spot going between good and evil.
A wonderful and glorious spot to call upon your spiritual side for help.

As you walk deeper in the thick woods, you came across a midnight adobe dome object.
As you get closer you notice a normal door in it, you notice it had no windows or a smoke hole.
As you were looking around you saw a beautiful clear blue lake about 20 feet away from the midnight adobe dome.

As you were alone for miles, you had no shelter so you went inside.
As you went into the unknown of the midnight adobe dome, you knew you needed light to see by.
As you found a hole in the middle, you found some wood and began to assemble the wood.

As you were able to start a fire.
As the fire was going, it became very hot; you were looking around and noticed no water or food.
As you were in it, you felt a little bit wet.
Later on you were getting very hot, you didn't realize the time.

As you started to relax and get comfortable
As you were seeing a glorious war within your soul,
As your body was going through changes,
As your mind was racing.
As many things were happening all at once.

As you were more than comfortable
As you relaxed it got more intense.
You called out for guidance and projection.
As the hours that you were there, started to turn into days.

As your ancestors' spirits and spirits of the animal friends start to show you the future.
You looked around and still no light in the midnight adobe.
As it was still hot even thou you had no fire.
As the spirits of good won over evil.

As it has been three long days since you went in the midnight adobe dome,
As you feel ready to come out and face the world, but before you do,
You go take a swim in the clear blue lake,
After that you lay on the grass of the lake and dried off by the sun's rays.

As you had a wonderful time, now you decide to go back to life in the world of tall skyscrapers,
And smoke and pollution, even through you would like to stay.
You head down from your harmony and peaceful place.


A PEACEFUL PLACE

A place of serenity and harmony,
A place of being one with nature.
A green and vibrant land.
A wooded area with lots of animals.

A giving back spot, when it gives to us.
A sacred spot, a spot going between good and evil.
A wonderful and glorious spot to call upon your spiritual side for help.

As you walk deeper in the thick woods, you came across a midnight adobe dome object.
As you get closer you notice a normal door in it, you notice it had no windows or a smoke hole.
As you were looking around you saw a beautiful clear blue lake about 20 feet away from the midnight adobe dome.

As you were alone for miles, you had no shelter so you went inside.
As you went into the unknown of the midnight adobe dome, you knew you needed light to see by.
As you found a hole in the middle, you found some wood and began to assemble the wood.

As you were able to start a fire.
As the fire was going, it became very hot; you were looking around and noticed no water or food.
As you were in it, you felt a little bit wet.
Later on you were getting very hot, you didn't realize the time.

As you started to relax and get comfortable
As you were seeing a glorious war within your soul,
As your body was going through changes,
As your mind was racing.
As many things were happening all at once.

As you were more than comfortable
As you relaxed it got more intense.
You called out for guidance and projection.
As the hours that you were there, started to turn into days.

As your ancestors' spirits and spirits of the animal friends start to show you the future.
You looked around and still no light in the midnight adobe.
As it was still hot even thou you had no fire.
As the spirits of good won over evil.

As it has been three long days since you went in the midnight adobe dome,
As you feel ready to come out and face the world, but before you do,
You go take a swim in the clear blue lake,
After that you lay on the grass of the lake and dried off by the sun's rays.

As you had a wonderful time, now you decide to go back to life in the world of tall skyscrapers,
And smoke and pollution, even through you would like to stay.
You head down from your harmony and peaceful place.


A PEACEFUL PLACE

A place of serenity and harmony,
A place of being one with nature.
A green and vibrant land.
A wooded area with lots of animals.

A giving back spot, when it gives to us.
A sacred spot, a spot going between good and evil.
A wonderful and glorious spot to call upon your spiritual side for help.

As you walk deeper in the thick woods, you came across a midnight adobe dome object.
As you get closer you notice a normal door in it, you notice it had no windows or a smoke hole.
As you were looking around you saw a beautiful clear blue lake about 20 feet away from the midnight adobe dome.

As you were alone for miles, you had no shelter so you went inside.
As you went into the unknown of the midnight adobe dome, you knew you needed light to see by.
As you found a hole in the middle, you found some wood and began to assemble the wood.

As you were able to start a fire.
As the fire was going, it became very hot; you were looking around and noticed no water or food.
As you were in it, you felt a little bit wet.
Later on you were getting very hot, you didn't realize the time.

As you started to relax and get comfortable
As you were seeing a glorious war within your soul,
As your body was going through changes,
As your mind was racing.
As many things were happening all at once.

As you were more than comfortable
As you relaxed it got more intense.
You called out for guidance and projection.
As the hours that you were there, started to turn into days.

As your ancestors' spirits and spirits of the animal friends start to show you the future.
You looked around and still no light in the midnight adobe.
As it was still hot even thou you had no fire.
As the spirits of good won over evil.

As it has been three long days since you went in the midnight adobe dome,
As you feel ready to come out and face the world, but before you do,
You go take a swim in the clear blue lake,
After that you lay on the grass of the lake and dried off by the sun's rays.

As you had a wonderful time, now you decide to go back to life in the world of tall skyscrapers,
And smoke and pollution, even through you would like to stay.
You head down from your harmony and peaceful place.


A PEACEFUL PLACE

A place of serenity and harmony,
A place of being one with nature.
A green and vibrant land.
A wooded area with lots of animals.

A giving back spot, when it gives to us.
A sacred spot, a spot going between good and evil.
A wonderful and glorious spot to call upon your spiritual side for help.

As you walk deeper in the thick woods, you came across a midnight adobe dome object.
As you get closer you notice a normal door in it, you notice it had no windows or a smoke hole.
As you were looking around you saw a beautiful clear blue lake about 20 feet away from the midnight adobe dome.

As you were alone for miles, you had no shelter so you went inside.
As you went into the unknown of the midnight adobe dome, you knew you needed light to see by.
As you found a hole in the middle, you found some wood and began to assemble the wood.

As you were able to start a fire.
As the fire was going, it became very hot; you were looking around and noticed no water or food.
As you were in it, you felt a little bit wet.
Later on you were getting very hot, you didn't realize the time.

As you started to relax and get comfortable
As you were seeing a glorious war within your soul,
As your body was going through changes,
As your mind was racing.
As many things were happening all at once.

As you were more than comfortable
As you relaxed it got more intense.
You called out for guidance and projection.
As the hours that you were there, started to turn into days.

As your ancestors' spirits and spirits of the animal friends start to show you the future.
You looked around and still no light in the midnight adobe.
As it was still hot even thou you had no fire.
As the spirits of good won over evil.

As it has been three long days since you went in the midnight adobe dome,
As you feel ready to come out and face the world, but before you do,
You go take a swim in the clear blue lake,
After that you lay on the grass of the lake and dried off by the sun's rays.

As you had a wonderful time, now you decide to go back to life in the world of tall skyscrapers,
And smoke and pollution, even through you would like to stay.
You head down from your harmony and peaceful place.


A PEACEFUL PLACE

A place of serenity and harmony,
A place of being one with nature.
A green and vibrant land.
A wooded area with lots of animals.

A giving back spot, when it gives to us.
A sacred spot, a spot going between good and evil.
A wonderful and glorious spot to call upon your spiritual side for help.

As you walk deeper in the thick woods, you came across a midnight adobe dome object.
As you get closer you notice a normal door in it, you notice it had no windows or a smoke hole.
As you were looking around you saw a beautiful clear blue lake about 20 feet away from the midnight adobe dome.

As you were alone for miles, you had no shelter so you went inside.
As you went into the unknown of the midnight adobe dome, you knew you needed light to see by.
As you found a hole in the middle, you found some wood and began to assemble the wood.

As you were able to start a fire.
As the fire was going, it became very hot; you were looking around and noticed no water or food.
As you were in it, you felt a little bit wet.
Later on you were getting very hot, you didn't realize the time.

As you started to relax and get comfortable
As you were seeing a glorious war within your soul,
As your body was going through changes,
As your mind was racing.
As many things were happening all at once.

As you were more than comfortable
As you relaxed it got more intense.
You called out for guidance and projection.
As the hours that you were there, started to turn into days.

As your ancestors' spirits and spirits of the animal friends start to show you the future.
You looked around and still no light in the midnight adobe.
As it was still hot even thou you had no fire.
As the spirits of good won over evil.

As it has been three long days since you went in the midnight adobe dome,
As you feel ready to come out and face the world, but before you do,
You go take a swim in the clear blue lake,
After that you lay on the grass of the lake and dried off by the sun's rays.

As you had a wonderful time, now you decide to go back to life in the world of tall skyscrapers,
And smoke and pollution, even through you would like to stay.
You head down from your harmony and peaceful place.


A PEACEFUL PLACE

A place of serenity and harmony,
A place of being one with nature.
A green and vibrant land.
A wooded area with lots of animals.

A giving back spot, when it gives to us.
A sacred spot, a spot going between good and evil.
A wonderful and glorious spot to call upon your spiritual side for help.

As you walk deeper in the thick woods, you came across a midnight adobe dome object.
As you get closer you notice a normal door in it, you notice it had no windows or a smoke hole.
As you were looking around you saw a beautiful clear blue lake about 20 feet away from the midnight adobe dome.

As you were alone for miles, you had no shelter so you went inside.
As you went into the unknown of the midnight adobe dome, you knew you needed light to see by.
As you found a hole in the middle, you found some wood and began to assemble the wood.

As you were able to start a fire.
As the fire was going, it became very hot; you were looking around and noticed no water or food.
As you were in it, you felt a little bit wet.
Later on you were getting very hot, you didn't realize the time.

As you started to relax and get comfortable
As you were seeing a glorious war within your soul,
As your body was going through changes,
As your mind was racing.
As many things were happening all at once.

As you were more than comfortable
As you relaxed it got more intense.
You called out for guidance and projection.
As the hours that you were there, started to turn into days.

As your ancestors' spirits and spirits of the animal friends start to show you the future.
You looked around and still no light in the midnight adobe.
As it was still hot even thou you had no fire.
As the spirits of good won over evil.

As it has been three long days since you went in the midnight adobe dome,
As you feel ready to come out and face the world, but before you do,
You go take a swim in the clear blue lake,
After that you lay on the grass of the lake and dried off by the sun's rays.

As you had a wonderful time, now you decide to go back to life in the world of tall skyscrapers,
And smoke and pollution, even through you would like to stay.
You head down from your harmony and peaceful place.


A PEACEFUL PLACE

A place of serenity and harmony,
A place of being one with nature.
A green and vibrant land.
A wooded area with lots of animals.

A giving back spot, when it gives to us.
A sacred spot, a spot going between good and evil.
A wonderful and glorious spot to call upon your spiritual side for help.

As you walk deeper in the thick woods, you came across a midnight adobe dome object.
As you get closer you notice a normal door in it, you notice it had no windows or a smoke hole.
As you were looking around you saw a beautiful clear blue lake about 20 feet away from the midnight adobe dome.

As you were alone for miles, you had no shelter so you went inside.
As you went into the unknown of the midnight adobe dome, you knew you needed light to see by.
As you found a hole in the middle, you found some wood and began to assemble the wood.

As you were able to start a fire.
As the fire was going, it became very hot; you were looking around and noticed no water or food.
As you were in it, you felt a little bit wet.
Later on you were getting very hot, you didn't realize the time.

As you started to relax and get comfortable
As you were seeing a glorious war within your soul,
As your body was going through changes,
As your mind was racing.
As many things were happening all at once.

As you were more than comfortable
As you relaxed it got more intense.
You called out for guidance and projection.
As the hours that you were there, started to turn into days.

As your ancestors' spirits and spirits of the animal friends start to show you the future.
You looked around and still no light in the midnight adobe.
As it was still hot even thou you had no fire.
As the spirits of good won over evil.

As it has been three long days since you went in the midnight adobe dome,
As you feel ready to come out and face the world, but before you do,
You go take a swim in the clear blue lake,
After that you lay on the grass of the lake and dried off by the sun's rays.

As you had a wonderful time, now you decide to go back to life in the world of tall skyscrapers,
And smoke and pollution, even through you would like to stay.
You head down from your harmony and peaceful place.


A PEACEFUL PLACE

A place of serenity and harmony,
A place of being one with nature.
A green and vibrant land.
A wooded area with lots of animals.

A giving back spot, when it gives to us.
A sacred spot, a spot going between good and evil.
A wonderful and glorious spot to call upon your spiritual side for help.

As you walk deeper in the thick woods, you came across a midnight adobe dome object.
As you get closer you notice a normal door in it, you notice it had no windows or a smoke hole.
As you were looking around you saw a beautiful clear blue lake about 20 feet away from the midnight adobe dome.

As you were alone for miles, you had no shelter so you went inside.
As you went into the unknown of the midnight adobe dome, you knew you needed light to see by.
As you found a hole in the middle, you found some wood and began to assemble the wood.

As you were able to start a fire.
As the fire was going, it became very hot; you were looking around and noticed no water or food.
As you were in it, you felt a little bit wet.
Later on you were getting very hot, you didn't realize the time.

As you started to relax and get comfortable
As you were seeing a glorious war within your soul,
As your body was going through changes,
As your mind was racing.
As many things were happening all at once.

As you were more than comfortable
As you relaxed it got more intense.
You called out for guidance and projection.
As the hours that you were there, started to turn into days.

As your ancestors' spirits and spirits of the animal friends start to show you the future.
You looked around and still no light in the midnight adobe.
As it was still hot even thou you had no fire.
As the spirits of good won over evil.

As it has been three long days since you went in the midnight adobe dome,
As you feel ready to come out and face the world, but before you do,
You go take a swim in the clear blue lake,
After that you lay on the grass of the lake and dried off by the sun's rays.

As you had a wonderful time, now you decide to go back to life in the world of tall skyscrapers,
And smoke and pollution, even through you would like to stay.
You head down from your harmony and peaceful place.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 31 March 2018

Kevin, such a great poem....10+++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 March 2018

Welcome to poemHunter! A place of serenity and harmony is a place of peace that holds love for all. This is a very brilliantly penned poem...10

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