Sugar Bear

A Perfect Moon! - Poem by Sugar Bear

I make the tub a prosper
Beautifying it with all I had
Aggravated to take a shower
I’ll take a bubble bath!

For my loving self
I trailed rose petals to the door
And onto the bubbly shelf
I put a little more

I lit myself some candles
To help me relax
And I switched the radio to my favorite channel
So I could hear my tracks, as I laid back

Just then the static
Began to get out of control
So I got out with a panic
To switch to “Silent Mode”

As I went to get back in
I slipped on the wet floor
And the splashidge
Made my lit candles no more

My petals flew
And piled on the walls
And the curtain I grabbed onto
Began to fall

Just then
My mom hears the great big BOOM!
She walks in
To view a great……moon!

Comments about A Perfect Moon! by Sugar Bear

  • (5/24/2010 1:53:00 PM)

    ha ha ha, prisless, never saw that one comming, very funny, shock and hooror for your mom, lol, well written: 0) (Report) Reply

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  • (4/20/2006 2:46:00 AM)

    An embarrassing situation put to good use in this funny poem! :) Still smiling. Sincerely, Connie Webb (Report) Reply

  • (4/20/2006 1:31:00 AM)

    Great stuff, and I'm gonna spend all day trying to find a way to use the word 'Splashidge! '
    10 from me
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  • (4/20/2006 12:52:00 AM)

    That would've been awkward. Good poem. :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 19, 2006

Poem Edited: Monday, November 23, 2009

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