A Philosophical Poem (Playing With Rhymes) Poem by Adilson Pinto

A Philosophical Poem (Playing With Rhymes)

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Don't waste your time speaking aloud
Against someone you don't have proud:
Otherwise you may say a hard word
And hurt deeply like a blade of a sword!
No, don't waste your precious time
Saying to everybody: really I'm
Against him! It will be better if you
Shut up your mouth because who
Try to understand the situation of another
Considering that he is a brother
Among billions of human beings
A very reasonable act - it seems!
Yes, there are many despicable ones
Against whom we'd like to throw stones
A lot of killers who live among us!
But keep calm, don't do thus!
Because there is a powerful law
Which says exactly it: ' Oh!
Did you act wrong to someone?
Before you come to count from one
to ten - you will pay for this! '
Yes, keep calm, think in the trees
Think in the birds, think in your soul:
And if the winds come - let them blow!

A Philosophical Poem (Playing With Rhymes)
Tuesday, June 13, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: philosophy
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is a poem which I wrote to test my skill
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 13 June 2017

You have got cent per cent in the test. Carry on. Thanks

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Adilson Pinto 14 June 2017

Thank you so much my dear friend! From Brazil please accept a fraternal hug!

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Chinedu Dike 13 June 2017

As the saying goes: 'Silence is golden' An insightful poem embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. A lovely piece indeed. Thanks for sharing Adilson.

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Adilson Pinto 14 June 2017

I thank you very very much for your nice words! Please accept a strong hug from Brazil! ! !

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Darlan M Cunha 09 June 2023

Desculpe a interrupção. O Drummond disse disse que 'Lutar com palavras é a luta mais vã. Entanto lutamos.' Felicidades. Um abraço.

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Darlan M Cunha 09 June 2023

lEsse teu poema lembrou-me o poema do Carlos Drummond de Andrade, onde ele diz 'Lutar com

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Prabir Gayen 23 March 2019

No, don't waste your precious time Saying to everybody: really I'm Against him! It will be better if you Shut up your mouth because who Try to understand the situation of another Considering that he is a brother Among billions of human beings

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Adilson Pinto 26 March 2019

Thank you my friend - your poems are so beautiful! I loved to read them!

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Prabir Gayen 23 March 2019

No, don't waste your precious time Saying to everybody: really I'm Against him! It will be better if you Shut up your mouth because who Try to understand the situation of another Considering that he is a brother Among billions of human beings.... beautiful

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Akhtar Jawad 03 September 2017

Yes, keep calm, think in the trees Think in the birds, think in your soul: And if the winds come - let them blow! A great poem.

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