Love became lame,
Faith lost its fame;
All were scared,
But brave was in blame;
Doc turned patient,
Treatment to end came,
Pain played the game,
Poor drug lost its name.
Based on a Muktak (a four-line quatrain)in Gujarati by a well-known ghazal writer, Shoonya Palanpuree, by way of tribute on his death anniversary
Translations | 12.03.2019 |
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Brilliant poem. Appropriate title. It is based on Muktak.in Gujarati by a well-known ghazal writer, Shoonya Palanpuree, by way of tribute on his death anniversary. Thanks for sharing with us.
Many thanks for appreciating this tribute to a poet, dear KM.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
You sir AP are a great explorer really lovely poetry incidents may be all want fame you and I may be you deserve it mostly
Okay, you being a few months younger, I give you the first choice
great we shall a pair make who the monkey who snake lol poet friend APPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP
An explorer never gets old exploring and trying new things. You too are one, and hence never feel old. Let us form an mutually appreciating co-operative society. Like... like those famous twosome, a camel and donkey, the former praising the other's voice, the later, well, former's beauty. But thank you for your sincere compliment.