A Promise Poem by Anoop Lokkur

A Promise

Rating: 4.1


A poem I shall write
This promise I make to thee,
Until the day we meet
Poems to you I shall read.


And on the day we meet
The stars will gleam like celestial lamps,
And the winds will whisper sweet nothings,
For on that day, we shall be one

A kiss we shall seal
For our hearts to heal,
Under the beaming moonlight
Our love we shall consummate.

Laying besides me
Your glowing naked body,
Inspiring me to write
Verses divine;

For your eyes,
Deep as the ocean
For your lips,
Sweeter than honey

For your hair,
Denser than the forests
For your scent,
Exhilarating me to ecstasy

For you, poems I shall write
And this promise forever I shall keep...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Princess Me 02 August 2007

so romantic...very nice!

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Konjit Berhane 16 October 2006

hum....i can tell u have got great ideas and ways of expression...can't wait to read more of ur poems **KoNi**

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Cynthia Vuthany Sok 13 October 2006

written so very nicely i give it a ten

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Karen Schley 09 October 2006

Your words are that of wisdom. when you read a poem a real poet should want to write, I want to write!

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Sridhar RVL 09 October 2006

beauty, you came out with a poem that just was lurking in my heart. Great poem. Hope

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