Anoop Lokkur

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A Promise - Poem by Anoop Lokkur

A poem I shall write
This promise I make to thee,
Until the day we meet
Poems to you I shall read.


And on the day we meet
The stars will gleam like celestial lamps,
And the winds will whisper sweet nothings,
For on that day, we shall be one

A kiss we shall seal
For our hearts to heal,
Under the beaming moonlight
Our love we shall consummate.

Laying besides me
Your glowing naked body,
Inspiring me to write
Verses divine;

For your eyes,
Deep as the ocean
For your lips,
Sweeter than honey

For your hair,
Denser than the forests
For your scent,
Exhilarating me to ecstasy

For you, poems I shall write
And this promise forever I shall keep...


Comments about A Promise by Anoop Lokkur

  • (8/2/2007 9:07:00 PM)

    so romantic...very nice! (Report)Reply

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  • (10/16/2006 9:49:00 AM)

    hum....i can tell u have got great ideas and ways of expression...can't wait to read more of ur poems

    **KoNi**
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  • (10/13/2006 9:12:00 PM)

    written so very nicely i give it a ten (Report)Reply

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  • (10/9/2006 5:33:00 PM)

    Your words are that of wisdom.
    when you read a poem a real poet should want to write,
    I want to write!
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  • (10/9/2006 11:52:00 AM)

    beauty, you came out with a poem that just was lurking in my heart.

    Great poem.

    Hope
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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 9, 2006

Poem Edited: Thursday, October 14, 2010


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