A Radiant Light Poem by Ravi Panamanna

A Radiant Light

Rating: 3.4


IN THE LIVING MEMORIES OF VANI. DAUGHTER OF MY COLLEGUE'S BROTHER, SHE WAS ONLY 16. SHE WAS A BLOOMING DANCER AND SINGER AND HAD ALL THE QUALITIES OF A NATURAL HEART- KINDNESS, LOVE AND GENTLENESS.
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The bud hath closed her eyes,
Thou hath returned to thy earthy bed.
The bird hath left the dales
Thou hath left a lingering song behind.

The sweetness of thy presence
Is a ceaseless spring long after the season.
The fragrance of jasmine
Is deep in our chest long after the winds.

It was a glow, silent,
Melting the thickness of night.
It was a flow, steady,
Reaching unto the streams of life.

And, adding to our treasured memories,
Thou wert all the way, a radiant light.
It was the universal spirit
Flowing in and through all thy themes.

And breathing the Zephyrus,
Thou wert serving to eyes and every heart.
Life was beautiful but posthaste
And plucked thee before the appointed hour.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 07 October 2009

when talent dies we feel very lost....a hearfelt write

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Surya . 07 October 2009

this poigant poem about a young girl is heart touching. a good work indeed as expected from ravi, thanx for sharing voted10 surya

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Lady Grace 07 October 2009

tho sadness is in the theme but it is nicely expressed..

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Joseph Poewhit 07 October 2009

Words are very heart felt. Tragic life ending in it's birth

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Sarwar Chowdhury 07 October 2009

yea very touchy! nice phrasology you penned! 10+

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Aldo Kraas 09 October 2009

You made the point in your poem that flowers don't last forever.

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Marieta Maglas 09 October 2009

This is a wonderful metaphorical poem... ''Thou wert all the way, a radiant light''....... lovely to read............. 10+++++++++++

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Rachel Butler 09 October 2009

Thou wert serving to eyes and every heart. Rachel Ann Butler

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Sandra Martyres 08 October 2009

As Karin says this piece is poignant, touching ans shows a deep sense of empathy...good write Ravi

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This has been written with so much empathy and your first stanza is so poignant and equally touching. In a more told worldly language you have brought in glorious imagery to crystalize the Radiant Light of her spirit. 10 love Karin

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Ravi Panamanna

Ravi Panamanna

Ottapalam- Kerala State- India
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