A Rainbow Of Life 🌈 Poem by M. Asim Nehal

A Rainbow Of Life 🌈

Rating: 4.9


You become my lover tonight
We shall play hide and seek
Under the moonbeam
You chose one star
And I shall pick one.

Let this long night melt
with the sweetness of our saliva.
Let the dews from our eyes
Make the dry land wet.

Let our dreams fly with
the fragrance of rose.
Let the river carry our emotions
to the sea where umpteen wishes
Waiting to embrace our love.

Before the final ring of the morning bell
Wipes off our love story by first sun rays.
Let us make the rainbow of life🌈
and complete another fairy tale.

Monday, October 5, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love and dreams
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Pintu Mahakul 05 October 2020

This poem is of course splendid. I have rated full stars for this poem. This poem seems to be vey deeply philosophic to my eyes. Thank you very much for writing the beautiful poem full of colours of rainbow. Life should be like a rainbow. Love should flow and float in both dream and reality.

1 0 Reply
Dr Pintu Mahakul 05 October 2020

In one of your poems you have mentioned earlier to become fragrance of rose, the most holy flower in Islam. I have remembered back it here. You want to become fragrance of colorful rose and reflect love. River embraces the sea and love embrace mind. First sunray is going to kiss the lovable love. Wisdom of Allah the first sunray brings. When wisdom we get as love of God, we are enriched.

1 0 Reply
Dr Pintu Mahakul 05 October 2020

I recite the Holy Qur'an's Surah Al Fathir, Chapter 35 verse 27 where it it is mentioned about the colours of wonderful mountains and we feel the rainbow merged in mountains with white, red, many diversified clours, black and white and more and more. Allah sends water from sky and sun rays from sun. Wonderful colours are formed in Earth. We see the beauty. We feel the beauty.

1 0 Reply
Dr Pintu Mahakul 05 October 2020

To attain love of Allah one has to become good whether it is day or night. There is always play of hide and seek at day and night and at our actions and reactions. Rainbow is colourful. Rainbow carries all colours of love and relationship. Reading your poem I visit the scenic beauty in mind about Rainbow Mountains, located in China’s Zhangye Danxia Landform Geological Park.

1 0 Reply
Dr Pintu Mahakul 05 October 2020

The motivation of bringing love within life to bear the fruit of positive action is reflected in rainbow. For me this poem seems to be philosophical but for some this may be a love poem. No doubt this a love poem but I relate this to lovable mercy of our Allah, our Almighty father. We have to be good and lovable because Allah always loves goo things (Surah Baqarah 2: 195)

1 0 Reply
Varsha M 17 January 2021

This is really a beautiful poetic expression... so well penned. Before the final ring of the morning bell Wipes off our love story by first sun rays. Let us make the rainbow of life🌈 and complete another fairy tale....these words really beautiful.

0 0 Reply
Zuzu Mutairi 07 October 2020

Awesome poem. With all colors this Rainbow of life remains unlike the Rainbow which flashes and is gone.

0 0 Reply
Ricky Manhatten 06 October 2020

Excellent poem Let our dreams fly with the fragrance of rose. Let the river carry our emotions to the sea where umpteen wishes Waiting to embrace our love.

1 0 Reply
Ricky Manhatten 06 October 2020

Wonderful poem. Let our dreams fly with the fragrance of rose. Let the river carry our emotions to the sea where umpteen wishes Waiting to embrace our love.

1 0 Reply
Valsa George 06 October 2020

You have scripted here a wonderful love story with romantic overtones! Really enjoyed reading and rainbows flash through my mind!

1 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success