On Cross Roads Poem by M. Asim Nehal

On Cross Roads

Rating: 5.0


My mind says - Leave it and proceed!
My heart says - Stay and believe,
Is it a tug of war between mind and heart?

When life is on crossroads - intrigue and pursues.
This is too absurd and at times looks so surreal
although my mind is strong and filled with knowledge
Whereas, my heart is full of wisdom inspired by experiences

Logic is trying hard to defeat dreams
Soul is playing games with body.
This tug of war is making life so meaningful,
like uneven waves in normally a calm sea.

On Cross Roads
Sunday, October 4, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: road
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jiwaji Mithaji 16 October 2020

I have seen many crossroads in my life and what I feel is this poem gives me and inside out view of those Crossroads making mistake in decision making is very common and is acceptable if we learn and proceed further not to make or commit similar mistake again so wonderful poem dear

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Michael Jack 21 October 2020

Great comment friend.......

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M Asim Nehal 21 October 2020

Thank you so much Jiwaji

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Trika Siway 17 October 2020

Decision making is key to success and it leads to various achievement and this poem is somewhere guiding us to make the correct intuitions

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M Asim Nehal 24 October 2020

Thx Much Trika..

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Indira Renganathan 22 August 2022

So beautifully said about the dilemma and war between mind and heart....full score

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Bharati Nayak 29 June 2022

A great poem Asim ji. While mind is ruled by reason, heart is ruled by emotion.Mind says one thing, heart says the other. Five stars for this beautiful poem.

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Ramesh C Mathur 15 June 2022

Greatness of the poet lies in the situation he creates. You did a wonderful job here.

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Richard Wlodarski 15 May 2022

Meditating on the tug of war.

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Williams S 12 May 2022

Interesting poem on one of the oldest question.

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