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Sunday, October 4, 2015

On Cross Roads

Rating: 5.0
My mind says - Leave it and proceed!
My heart says - Stay and believe,
Is it a tug of war between mind and heart?

When life is on crossroads - intrigue and pursues.
This is too absurd and at times looks so surreal
although my mind is strong and filled with knowledge
Whereas, my heart is full of wisdom inspired by experiences

Logic is trying hard to defeat dreams
Soul is playing games with body.
This tug of war is making life so meaningful,
like uneven waves in normally a calm sea.
M Asim Nehal
Topic(s) of this poem: road
COMMENTS
Vartaka C K 12 January 2021
A struggle ?? in life is worth. Your poem deals with inner and outer struggle.
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Rajeshwari Kawal 12 January 2021
A reality of this life nicely ?? captured
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Yohana Valerie 07 January 2021
Tug of war is always fascinating.
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Darren Jkoeryo 06 January 2021
DJ admire your inspiring skills.
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Bustayi Mahi 02 January 2021
Tug of war will remain till the very end. Nice work.
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Michael Jack 31 December 2020
Worth reading again and again. Inspiring
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Susan Williams 30 December 2020
tug-of-wars------you're right, they make life more---more meaningful, more complex, more colorful, more intelligent---awesome insight and write, top marks
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Varsha M 26 December 2020
Yes sir these tug of wars mske life meaningful. So beautifully captured in your words...
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Poetic Sky 25 December 2020
Wisdom in your poem is apparent: Logic is trying hard to defeat dreams Soul is playing games with body.
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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 December 2020
Logic defeats the dream but perception motivates mind. Soul plays with body and mind revives its beauty. This poem is very interestingly penned..
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