Poetic Amoure

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A Random Bird - Poem by Poetic Amoure

Birds of a feather, with a birds eye view,
Can i have a map, dont know where im flying to.
Dont know where im going, just know its time to leave,
didnt know how to chew but i give what i recieve.
I fly where i please, and i plan as i go,
i spread my wings to fly yes I learn as i grow.
This poem may mean nothing but to me its everything,
cause i am only a bird in the morning hear me sing.
I fly to Phoenix Arizona, I fly south in the winter,
I was a beautiful creature when I looked in the mirror,
but for now Im just a random bird lost without guidence.

Comments about A Random Bird by Poetic Amoure

  • Edward Kofi Louis (6/15/2011 5:57:00 AM)

    A very nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing it with us.


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  • (6/14/2011 5:42:00 AM)

    Very well written...it loses its beat at the end last two to four lines I'd say (Report)Reply

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  • Urshula Davis (6/13/2011 2:44:00 PM)

    Go head girl! Do ya thang! I love it bravo bravo! -clap clap- (Report)Reply

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  • (6/8/2011 11:41:00 PM)

    Great poem. Rich in imagery and style. Wonderfully conceived.
    Liked it.
    I rated it 10/10.
    Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 8, 2011

Poem Edited: Tuesday, June 14, 2011

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