A Ray Reaches Poem by Neela Nath Das

A Ray Reaches

Rating: 5.0


In utter despair I feel
alone and none to
Take Care of me here
In the awesome site of poem.
A masque, bullies me behind
The guise of a monster.
Unnerved I decide not to
Tread on this way.
I feel asleep,
Going deep,
Into the bed
Of My dream.
Suddenly, A ray reaches
Then two, three, four...
Numbers of rays,
Reach on my sleepy eyes.
Amazed I find my friends
Of P.H are standing near
Holding lamps of hope.
I awake and follow them,
Their poems, comments, write.
I follow their light! ! !

Saturday, August 30, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: friend
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chuy Amante 30 August 2014

Neela! You are a great LIGHT! ! ! Thanks for all you give us. True sweetness YOU ARE! Namaste-^-

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Somanathan Iyer 02 September 2014

A nice exhibition of poetic prowess. enjoyed reading.

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Geetha Jayakumar 01 September 2014

Beautiful poem Neela. I loved the lines.... Amazed I find my friends Of P.H are standing near Holding lamps of hope. I awake and follow them, Their poems, comments, write. I follow their light! ! ! Very true said, friends give us ray of hope, they give us light when we are in need. And you write down poems when you are distressed, which will definitely ease you pain. Loved the way you presented it.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 31 August 2014

VIBGYOR- THE RAINBOW not when there is a rain then bow... emotional poem Neela thanks

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Akhtar Jawad 31 August 2014

Neela you are also a color of this spectrum and beautiful one.

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Gajanan Mishra 30 August 2014

I follow the right, good living, thanks,

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