M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 164,655 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

A Scene At Beach - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Waves are dancing
To the tunes of sea

Birds are flying
Against the breeze

Light illuminates the dark patches
Hope is rising with more delight

Kids are busy making castle of sand
Waves dash them down

Teens are flying kite in the sky
With the height they feel freedom full size

The beach is calm and cool as cucumber

Only tsunami of thoughts
Troubles some hearts and minds.

Topic(s) of this poem: beach

Form: Free Verse


Comments about A Scene At Beach by M. Asim Nehal

  • (11/21/2015 12:01:00 PM)


    Flawless beauty. Admire your writing. (Report) Reply

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  • Akhtar Jawad (11/8/2015 9:43:00 AM)


    The beach is calm and cool as cucumber
    Only tsunami of thoughts
    Troubles some hearts and minds.
    Beautiful lines.
    (Report) Reply

  • Hazel Durham (11/8/2015 8:15:00 AM)


    Brilliant write you have captured the peace and joy of the beach but what is really going on inside the thoughts of people! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 30, 2015

Poem Edited: Monday, September 7, 2015


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