I decided to go to a party with friends I've known for years
And the first thing I noticed was a tub full of beers.
I grew up believing I could hold my own with a few
But a few became too many as the length of the party drew.
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The consequence of a single reckless acts may be catastrophic. The story in the poem has been brought out quite nicely. Enjoyed it.
Very Honest poem: There is Soul There is a Grace There is a Lance Don't forget the Guilt Hence, one can't forget, Inner deep feelings Aroused the prose. Written Instantly
Something like this made me feel so mixed of emotions. I was mad because he was drunk and drove, he crashed and saw the baby girl which made me cry, and I was surprised when the judge sentenced 7 years. Oh how horrible that must've been. What I like about your poems is that you set that image...and that's what a true poet does. Good Job, Tyease
Jason, great poem. It was nice meeting you at the coffee shop today. 7-26-18