A Shattered Heart

Rating: 3.5
You left when i needed you most
saying goodbye
im shattered
im scared
im lying on the floor wounded coated in my own blood
senses gone
sight left
hearing too
smell well thers nothing left
touch disappeared
where are you my sence of security?
will you leave me too?
to late you already did
what am i to do to gather up pieces of my shattered heart?
Friday, June 3, 2011
Anita Cross 21 October 2012
thanks guys for all the great comments and great reviews i hope you like my other poems aswell
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Philip Jose 21 June 2011
oh anita, this is an excellent poem.thanks a lot for penning down ur shattered heart
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Dr.subhendu Kar 20 June 2011
quite poignant write, tearing too by the heart as if green to be disowned from grace. ingeniously wrought on rune of grief, thanks for sharing
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David Beckham 20 June 2011
Great expressions, craft theme, leaves me needing to know how the poet did gather the broken pieces lol and that is the beauty of poetry, sometimes u have to fill in the blanks! I can totally connect! tfs 10/10
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Romeo Della Valle 19 June 2011
A very well penned and poignant write! 10+++ Keep it up, you got what it takes to make it through the poetry world, talent! Thanks for sharing, Love and Peace for always!
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