A Sickness Of You Poem by Adrian Cordova
A Sickness Of You
I've chosen, I'm going to take a left, and head straight towards her in the forest, not the grove…
…I want to tell her, but someones holding me back…
What did I do deserve this, 'god', did I take one of your most prized angels?
Well guess what, 'god', you don't deserve her! I hate you for what you did to her, you let her go through all of that pain, and not once did you show her kindness, not once did you let anybody know what needed to be done, but on top of that, you stopped me…from getting help…on time…you made me…cry well over…a million tears…for this. I think it's time for you to just stay out of my life...
...let me get close to her, please if you have a heart, just let go of me…
I like this one, because you put your heart in it, it was something new for me to read, the one part that I did like the most was at the end when you said 'let me goe close to her, please if you have a heart, just let go of me.' It dose makes me wonder if God dose has a heart, because of thepain he put us all through every day Robin Miller
dayyyumm fool thats awesome! ! that was bold and a fantastic read. keep it up man
it flows nicely i reminds me of something that happened to/about me once - that's the important thing - people being able to relate to your words :)
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4/25/2024 2:08:49 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Wow I really like this poem. It shows a lot of pain and suffering. I feel the same way sometimes toward God. Hell I'm atheist.10/10. Love it.