A Silent Withdrawl Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

A Silent Withdrawl

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I stayed back and withdrew
This step was not new
I was used to certain things
I was weak and had crippled the wings

I had lacked the will power and courage
I was hardly able to mange
It was one of the most unfortunate
I considered it as nothing but ill fate

On needs strong will and determination
There has to no alternative than dedication
The problems may come in bundles
It can help you to overcome the hurdle

You should not loose the patience and mind
It requires some solutions to be found
Time will not wait for any one
The problem has to be tackled and done

The defeatist tendency should be rejected
It must be done away with and objected
There should not be any delay on our part
It must be addressed from the beginning or start

It is not the real way to come with formula
There should be clear way out and no lacuna
It may help to tide away some difficulties
You must be comfortable with all the amenities

If you are defeated in your approach
No one can bring you on track not even coach
You have to search out the options and ways
It may infuse you with some hope and rays

If you loose hope then there is certain death
You may loose hope and faith
It still has left some strength
You can hope to win with some good wave length

We should never give up till the end
We should confide it to friends
There may come out some solution
There has to be some resolute action

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Maulin Shah 01 August 2010

I stayed back and withdrew This step was not new I was used to certain things I was weak and had crippled the wings.... sign of weakness.....10

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Chand Shikari 27 July 2010

I stayed back and withdrew This step was not new I was used to certain things I was weak and had crippled the wings... cowardly act and unbecoming of man....10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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