A Smile and A Gentleness Comments

Amazing poem reflecting great zest and love for life. Thanks. A few words to quote: Come..... out and play! Flirt more naturally..... Teach me how to kiss.

I like this poem too- I wonder if there are more of his poems printed somewhere- -Google, here I come

very interesting poem... thanks

A natural poet. Thanks for sharing, Coleman

[..] cumin seeds browning, I am inside all of this with my soul. I like the finale.. and about cumin seeds: ''Cumin is a flowering plant in the family Apiaceae, native from the east Mediterranean to India. Its seeds are used in the cuisines of many different cultures, in both whole and ground form. It also has many uses as a traditional medicinal plant.'' (from Wikipedia)

Sounds sweet and witty... Good work.