A Soothing Walk Poem by Dennis Go

A Soothing Walk



A soothing walk down
The park lets my mind
Groove upon the shadows.

Down among the trees
And darkness it drools
Without the confinement
Of spirits.

I can see
Those signs posted
Above city streets.
It says what my heart
Showcased years ago:
For sale.

What are these
But billboards and
Posters of our lives?

Look at the next block
And see another shadow
Dancing on limelight.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fred Babbin 12 January 2010

Your poem has a nice rhythm,

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Aira Olayvar 11 January 2010

“The soothing walk” – with so much imagination… I also like to stay in the park and most of all, I like walking, for I know that while walking the best of ideas and solutions will knock at my door… I am playing in the park, I am painting and making drawings therein, but the emotional terrain you are describing is of great intrigue… nice work!

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Dennis Go

Dennis Go

Manila, Philippines
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