A Soul That Loves You Poem by Gina Albiek

A Soul That Loves You

Rating: 4.8


For the first time I feel
That the sadness I have no doctor can heel
Though it should have been a happy day
But all the happiness has faded away

This world is too tight for me
It became so hard achieving what I dream to be
Cause my dreams got higher that reality
A dream of changing my whole personality

My eyes are wet, they are full of tears
This memory will stick in my head even after years
And I still love you in all the seasons
And I still love you and it needs no reasons

Crying clouds filled this vast blue sky
Tried reaching them, but they were so high
Your love was shining my heart so bright
Your love didn't leave me depressed in this dark night

Black & white can never be mixed
Also my heart can never be fixed
My eyes and my feelings won't lie
My dead soul forever will cry

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 23 October 2018

Crying clouds filled this vast blue sky Tried reaching them, but they were so high Your love was shining my heart so bright Your love didn't leave me depressed in this dark night bring positive notes into life. smile and the world will smile with you. go to little children. they teach us a lot to smile, to laugh and make this world a wonderful place for you and for all the others. thank u dear poetess for this fine poem.. tony

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Chinedu Dike 05 August 2015

Well articulated train of thoughts, nicely encapsulated and insightfully penned with conviction. A beautiful love poem with lovely rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing.

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Unwritten Soul 31 March 2012

Black and white can never be mixed? ...yes it can and they called Gray :) , there's no way we need to find a reason to feel down, because what we need is the reason how to get rise up....This poem feels so strong in emotions, so hard and so nice at same time, you did a very good job Ghina, keep writing! ! _Unwritten Soul

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