A Spin Poem by Doris Cornago

A Spin

Rating: 5.0


This is
The woman
Who loved you
From the moment
You made her know
You can be most kind
Touch her with snakes
Entwining, had her run
Days full of fun, sharing
Thoughts-bound poems
Sunlight streaming in her
Darkened room, smell of
Sweet lilacs, symphony
Filled the room when a
Key icon glows green
When days end grim
Fancy blossoms
Decked brows
Send in a
Spin

Wednesday, May 23, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: happiness,loneliness,love and life,memories,survival
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Even when business prospects are not good, I feel wonderful as if I have beautiful flowers on my hair, feeling a lift in my spirits. There's a wish that comes in the end, unexpressed,I'm truly sorry I can't be more of who you need, someone you can feel happy with, someone right there with you, but in my heart, there's a power I feel I can bargain with in the end. If I can tell a higher power to release you, I will. Our days are numbered, but that does not mean we can't enjoy poems in the interim.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 24 May 2018

Doris, such an inspiring poem...10++++

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deborrahcornago 24 May 2018

Thank you, Bro. Bernard. You inspire me, too, in always being there. A poet cannot pursue a poem without the appreciation of those dear to her. That's the truth about poems and poets.

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Manonton Dalan 23 May 2018

i like the shape of the poem ...awesome.

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deborrahcornago 24 May 2018

Hi Manonton. It's actually a pregnant D. There's so much more to this poem, but thank you for the visual appreciation.

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