A Storm Called Carding Poem by Doris Cornago

A Storm Called Carding

Rating: 5.0


Sun
Dappled
Morning rain
Gone without a
Warning floods in
Basements messed
Washed away rooftops
Wetness warps windows
Water winnows willows
Disaster dashes hopes
Drills homes hollows
Reasons rock rows
Gooey ghosts go
Grumble grow
Groggy gruel
Mudslinger
Mockup
Mow

A Storm Called Carding
Saturday, August 11, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: disasters,lost love,sadness,storm,weather
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Another storm hits my country called "Carding" and it changes many lives. The wetness and the mud linger although the wind has abated and the sky has cleared. This morning after the storm felt like that moment when your car gets crushed by a wayward truck and you are numbed by it, wondering what could you have done to prevent it from happening. You feel different and your epiphany comes that you do not know anything else but life is precious. You become more human and humbled by all the disasters which mar your plans. Everything is not according to your own timeframe.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 12 August 2018

Doris, such a wonderful poem....10++++

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