A Sunny June Day [ 2 Tanka ] Poem by Nudershada Cabanes

A Sunny June Day [ 2 Tanka ]



A sunny June day
The weather is warm and bright
The sky a pale blue
A lovely day to enjoy
A breath of warm summer breeze

Leaves rustle, listless
In the heat of the sun's glow
Their color fading
In this blazing summer heat
A little rain would be great

Friday, June 8, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: summer,sun,weather
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Murray Smith 08 June 2018

We are there. The test for a good poem.++10

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Thank you for the comment Robert. Glad to read you here.

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Aarzoo Mehek 08 June 2018

I can feel the sun... probably a little rain will quench the thirst of the souls. beautifully written.10+

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Thank you Aarzoo for your wonderful comment

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