I miss my hometown
The place of my birth
The land of my fathers
The cradle of my youth
I miss its proud mountain
That stands aloof
In the heart of the mainland
I miss its ocean teeming with sealife
I miss its green sea
That sparkle under the rays of the sun
And its white sands beneath the shore
The vast horizon that has no end
I miss its ground
Where my feet had run and trumpled on
Its gentle breeze that blew my hair
On hot summer days
I miss the sound of the wind blowing
When a storm is coming to our shore
Oh how I miss those things
If only I can come home
I miss its ocean teeming with sealife I miss its green sea............two or ONE body of water(s) ? ..........or did you mean green tea? ? ha ha. i've enjoyed reading this poem. i suppose you are stuck in a big city now, or, heaven forbid, in the U.S. of A.! ! ! to MyPoemList. and it looks like you are relatively new to PoemHunter. WELCOME ABOARD! bri ;) (continued) ............
It's such an effective poem that it touches the heart and soul of its readers. A great poem by Nudershada Cabanes.
The place of my birth The land of my fathers The cradle of my youth I miss its proud mountain That stands aloof In the heart of the mainland I miss its ocean teeming with sealife....great love and emotions for your motherland is reflected here. An adorable piece of poetry....5 stars.
had u known all that you will now miss you would never have had the occasion to composing such a really MISSING POEM otherwise on PH SEE EVER CLOUD has a silver lining PL READ MY MOMS'S SMILES U may like
This is a lovely poem emanating from a beautiful poetic heart! Your longing for your hometown, its surroundings is vividly reflected in this beautiful poem. My favorite lines: I miss my hometown/The place of my birth/The land of my fathers/The cradle of my youth/I miss its proud mountain! Appreciated…10
Apparently you are no longer in your hometown. Many of us feel nostalgic about our origins, and I am no exception. I really like this poem. By the way, it's not too late to edit it and change 'trumpled' to the word you intended.
This poem resonates for me, Nudershada. There are circumstances in life, beyond our control that deter us from going back to our hometown. A very touching piece beautifully crafted.10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
How poignant is this poem! Thanks for sharing.