A Sunrise Suicide Poem by BlacknessRose ...

A Sunrise Suicide

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She sits on a cliff
Watching the sunset
Beholding the sight
Laid perfectly before her
No wind is blowing
The sun running to hide
The reds on oranges
On pinks on purples
She watches as the moon comes out
Waiting ever patiently
On the third moon, I'll return
The words ran through her head
She waited for him
He was at battle
Fighting for her
Coming back to her
She looks at the moon
It's whiteness, red
Watching her waiting
Keeping her company
Waiting for him
But as the hours pass
Her hope fades
It was the third moon
Where was he?
As the sunrise approaches
She stands up
The first peak of the sun
Melts her heart
She jumps from the cliff
Leaving his letter

A man approaches
Seeing his letter
He doesn't see her
But feels her sadness
He took slower than usual
From his wounds
But made it at the last third moon
He thought she had left
Thinking he wasn't returning
His heart slowed it's beating
Had she left?
After she saw the sun
The birds not yet singing
The sun slowly rising
The man lost the battle
And his love
His mental state couldn't handle
This stress of reality
He stepped to the edge
And saw her on the rocks
Blood running into the water
But sleeping peacefully
The man jumped down
To be with her
The birds started singing
Their new song
A sunrise suicide
After the third moon
She waited for him
He wanted her
A Sunrise suicide

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
DELETED NOW 18 June 2008

I love the discription in this poem and the emotion it brings to the readers.

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(: God's Wild Child :) 05 June 2008

wow. thats deep...good job. if u get the chance come check out my poems, I could use your input. thx.

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Lou Embalsado 11 April 2008

wow...deep...i wish i could express my feelings like you can...

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