A Sweet Kiss Poem by tierra fisher

A Sweet Kiss

Rating: 5.0


When I daydream
What do I see
You, waiting for me

You ask me how I feel
With you it feels real
We sit and talk
and on the beach we walk

You compliment me
As we watch the deep blue sea
I look at your eyes
and you start to watch mines
I move close to your face
Too see how a kiss taste

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terrance Woolridge 27 April 2007

I like I like, good one Tierra

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Danny H 03 August 2009

This was short but yet very vivid and the feelings in this poem, always bring up that special someone people have, or want i loved this poem.

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Anna jonson 20 August 2008

very beautifuly written...

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mads kck 15 June 2008

real gud. keep them coming

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Alan Curtis 12 June 2008

I have a real vivid image of walking on tha beach 70 miles from where I live n North Cali as I read this poem.U make it feel so deep. Loved it Tierra, keep soothing me with u'r words. Peace and love Hippy Sav

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Amber Ross 13 August 2007

i love it tierra love it hey i got some new poems check em out

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