A Tear In The Sea Poem by florentina cornelia

A Tear In The Sea

Rating: 4.5


I hear but silence,
I see but nothingness,
I open my eyes,
As the world reveals.


A sea of lost dreams
Waits to be sank.
A sky of grey hopes
Waits to be crashed.

Waves of revelations
Rend the cold air,
But only temptations
Brought us to despair.


Beside me is infinity,
Above me – eternity,
And I, a grain of sand
Vanished away in the dark.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
everything has a name but me 13 February 2008

'T is a true contemplation of sheer loss of hope and our humble place in this world. Beautiful

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Mary Gordley 07 February 2008

Florentina, I love the title and the wonderful poem lives up to its promise. Thanks.

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Jeannie Ann Clark 06 February 2008

You write well...keep writing and expressing. Thank you.

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