indira babbellapati

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A Tear Speaks... - Poem by indira babbellapati

Sorrow at times builds
an impenetrable rocky fort
around body and heart;
I grope in vain for a narrow
crack at least that allows
a slight air passage to relieve
the humid congestion gathered
on a sky of unproductive clouds
of varying shades of black
to grey... but what really
stays put in this ever lasting
transient nature of life...
won't a whirlwind,
won't a hurricane unleash
to render the fort into
uncountable rocks and pebbles?
But what if each part
of the debris still carried
the ageless me in itself?
Tell me...

Topic(s) of this poem: sorrow

Comments about A Tear Speaks... by indira babbellapati

  • Yash Shinde (4/25/2014 11:18:00 PM)

    Heart touching, poignant and intriguing.......
    a tear speaks for itself.......
    A sad tale, beautifully told........
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  • (4/22/2014 10:31:00 AM)

    Beautifully written poem Indira, enjoyed the read.
    Siya_! !
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  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (4/20/2014 9:16:00 PM)

    A fort turns into rubbles. Anything can happen any time. Beautifully said. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Shahzia Batool (4/15/2014 3:33:00 PM)

    it touched... beyond any critical appraisal...sending it to my poem list for many merits it owns! (Report) Reply

  • Shraddha The Poetess (4/15/2014 9:11:00 AM)

    Just fantastic mam...... Really a tear speaks..... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 15, 2014

Poem Edited: Wednesday, April 30, 2014

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