The potter's daughter; like her father's craftsmanship
very beautiful to her *pinafore dress and the pigtails.
He sniffs when I ring the bicycle bell
during my routine delivery of their daily bread.
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a homey feel to this poem nimal! leaves one feeling fresh, and natural. lovely work! love starr xxx
A story /poem that leaves it's readers with a wholesome feel in the hearts Brilliant Love duncan X
As usual, my friend, and outstanding piece. I read your postings and I feel a joy, not unlike the feeling one gets when they see a loved one. This is your usual standard of craftsmanship with that sly tinge of humour, wich is there but is never the reason for the poem.
This is a small gem of a poem. It would be difficult not to like this boy who makes the best of a very hard life. Lovely work, Nimal. Regards, Sandra
A nostalgic write about young love written with a graceful pen and a distinctive smile that is pure Nimal. Always a joy to read your work, good friend. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥