A Very Different View (From The One Last Night) Poem by Not Long Left

A Very Different View (From The One Last Night)

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It is only when you roll over
in dizzy drunken slumber,
with sleepy spittle seeping
from your dry mouth,
with red wine stained lips,
and a smudged rainbow
of Makeup upon your face.
Does it occur to me,
that you look so very different
from the girl I was ready to sell
my left leg to bed.
I only wished I had taken a beer
home with me,
for these eye's are in need of goggles.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Tiong Chunghoo 11 April 2006

with red wine stained lips, and a smudged rainbow very good lines especially smudged rainbow.

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Gina Onyemaechi 21 February 2006

Ha ha ha! ! ! 'Smudged rainbow of make-up': yee hee hee! ! ! Don't say this to her, though, eh, Vincey? Just gently help her up and out and shut the door firmly behind her. Waggling her finger at you (not!) , Gina.

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Moya Levy 21 February 2006

Brilliant Vincent! ! Wish I didn't know what you were talking about.....but I so do lol! ! Moyaxx

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