A Village Near Kaesong Poem by Michael Pruchnicki

A Village Near Kaesong

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Once upon a time I lived
in a hut with ten other guys
in a village near Kaesong
north of the 38th parallel

Snow fell that February
drifting in row on row
on the rice paddies
and in the village street

We slept spooning
guy to guy on the floor
dreaming of home
and the girls we left

It was a dream world
then and now as I recall
the awful brutality
of our awkward life

We foraged like insects
for leftovers from rice
infested with droppings
of the silent mice

We were less than human
and we felt ashamed
to have become prisoners
of bestial captors

Three years in captivity
and we came home
abashed and silent
to another country!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roy Storey 15 August 2008

You do not get court you die, for your country or come home when you won.which you did not. like this silly war now there can be no winners theres notthing to win.i like yhe poem its good.

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Colin Jeffery 04 August 2008

This is a great poem that hits all the targets. Brilliant

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Ted Sheridan 23 July 2008

Is there something in the air today? As I posted something similar. Michael, very few people will ever know the sacrifices we made...because we came back and the others didn't. Aside from that, I thank you for your service to this country and I salute you as one vet to another. Be safe my friend.

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