A Villain In All Of Us

Rating: 4.5

The hero stands across from me, I dare not speak his name.
Chivalrous and Valiant, the source of all my shame.
I wonder how it came to this. What was my mistake?
That he should be the hero is a sick and twisted fate.
It didn't have to be this way. I wanted to be good.
But things didn't end up the way I surely thought they would.
So now he has come for me and there's little I can do.
I wonder if he knows that there's a villain in him too.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jessica Lockhart 24 March 2014

I love your poems. Keep writing.

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Alandra Moreira 04 December 2009

Very catchy, and I love the way you capture it with the wording...

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Penney Cooper 04 November 2009

I love this, you've got real talent. May I make one small suggestion? ! Break it into two verses. Excellent :)

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