Sergeant Love

Rating: 5.0

Stand up straight!
Look alive!
There's no where left for you to hide
Watch her eyes not her chest
You stupid fool your hair's a mess
Now make a smile not a grimace
Say something smart and nail the finish
Don't worry if she walks away
You'll live to try another day

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 06 December 2009

You'll live to try another day nice reflective poem 10

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Alandra Moreira 04 December 2009

lol awesome.. nothing like a good pick up line failing right? loved it 10+

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Penney Cooper 12 November 2009

watch her eyes not her chest-great line! i'm a fan ;)

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