A Wake Poem by Tears In Rain

A Wake

Rating: 4.8


She dare not breath
And she dare not speak
Lest she awaken inside
The very love she seeks

Though she feels its embrace
break through the clouds in the skies
With its warm glow on her face
Still she won't dare to
Open her eyes

She's not aware if she sleeps
She doesn't care if she's weak
For what is stirring inside
May be the love she seeks

Now she feels its embrace
Break through the clouds in the skies
With its warm glow on her face
She cannot bear to
Open her eyes

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
***** ********* 14 January 2006

A excellently expressed poem of love Tears. My favourite. 10 from lovely Tai

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Lylyanna Pilewski 15 August 2005

very good this is the first of your poems I've read Lylyanna

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John Tiong Chunghoo 05 August 2005

love it in a very strange way.

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RoJa Mitchell 27 July 2005

loved the poem too............

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Uriah Hamilton 27 July 2005

I never really want to open mine either, but how would I read poetry?

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