A Warring One Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

A Warring One



[inspired by poet RAVI SATHASIVAM'S 'A NEW PROVERB']

A WAR
with a weapon in hand
does one thing for sure

whether the warring one
after his end..will go to hell or heaven
i am not very sure

a warring one with weapon in hand
even if his is a very right stand
will do this for sure

HE WILL BRING THE HELL DOWN HERE FOR SURE

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Krishnarasa Seshadri 30 January 2010

Reminds me of Ted Hughes....he also felt that there was no glory in war! Futility is the beginning and end of wars!

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Rajaram Ramachandran 29 January 2010

They say everything is fair in love and war, but as you say the sufferers are the common people.

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Ravi Sathasivam 19 January 2010

'A warring one with weapon in hand even if his is a very right stand will do this for sure..' 'HE WILL BRING THE HELL DOWN HERE FOR SURE' That's true. Well said Thanks

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