Samanyan Lakshminarayanan


# The Oldest Love - Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

my first love poem
happens to be the world's oldest one
between
the seashore wind and the tree in the shore
the wind and the tree
the shameless lovers for ages...for
they have a friend to watch over
the sea wave the friend would push over
her friend the wind to the tree..and with a glee
will flee back..when the two become one
the naughty and the innocent girl she is..the sea wave will come forth
again to watch over
and again with a glee will flee back
this love happens to be the oldest one
my fist love poem


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  • (11/17/2009 10:19:00 AM)

    Love and romance with Nature and She knows how to up-pull these elements of love in poet’s psyche
    Ten.
    dr. sakti

    Cordially invite to my page [poem] read / comment and….
    ds
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  • (10/31/2009 10:27:00 AM)

    Sublime piece full of imaginary twist... (Report)Reply

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  • (10/25/2009 11:13:00 AM)

    Eternal love is among the gifts of nature, e.g.wind and tree, tree and sea etc.They make their love obvious, oblivious of the privacies.BRILLIANT IDEA. (Report)Reply

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  • Akram Saqib (10/25/2009 5:34:00 AM)

    firrst love can not be forgeteed (Report)Reply

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  • (10/24/2009 6:25:00 PM)

    original images put in a dramatic scene. Thank you for sharing. (Report)Reply

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  • (10/18/2009 8:04:00 AM)

    haha! ....love is everywhere! (Report)Reply

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  • (10/12/2009 3:00:00 PM)

    will flee back..when the two become one


    Rachel Ann Butler
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  • (10/10/2009 5:59:00 PM)

    I love how you write because it is complicated the first couple of times through, and then it just clicks in the head. A trait that always eludes me in my own personal writing...

    The way you compare the wave to a naughty female is classic. It is profound and maybe, if you look at it right, a little bit humorous...

    Another poem to ponder on when I am just sitting around with my token female friend. Thank you.
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  • (10/10/2009 8:32:00 AM)

    nice...very nice...the tree the waves and the sea...wonderful story (Report)Reply

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  • (10/7/2009 12:02:00 PM)

    A very vivid imagery and an exquisite imagination make this poem a delight to read.10. (Report)Reply

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  • Vidi Writes (10/5/2009 11:19:00 AM)

    To be frank....
    In love there is nothing OLD
    Everything is GOLD

    So you may call it a golden era
    Your fist love poem...drives away the October cold
    to shine like a gold.
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  • (9/29/2009 6:10:00 PM)

    Really nice imagery and use of a natural event to explain an emo experience. (Report)Reply

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  • (9/28/2009 10:12:00 AM)

    How lovely is this; just proves again, that to take the most simplest of humble things, you can elevate them without limit, by merely writing about nature as it takes it's daily course. Love everything about this..cheers, Patti (Report)Reply

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  • (9/28/2009 9:17:00 AM)

    wonderful lyric symbolistic poem, very wise written, thank you for sharing.......10+++++++++ (Report)Reply

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  • (9/27/2009 10:46:00 AM)

    The old love poem is crafted carefully and thoughtfully. Nice composition. (Report)Reply

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  • Ravi Sathasivam (9/26/2009 11:34:00 PM)

    Beautiful expression of love.
    Well penned
    Enjoyed reading it
    Thanks for sharing with me
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  • (9/25/2009 10:28:00 AM)

    This truly a beautiful love poem with its stupendous images! a first rate poem 10+++ (Report)Reply

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  • (9/25/2009 9:45:00 AM)

    A very good first poem. A beautiful love affair. Good write. Your friend Lynn (Report)Reply

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  • Shekhar Joshi (9/25/2009 9:29:00 AM)

    Simply beautiful...........loved it (Report)Reply

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  • (9/25/2009 9:18:00 AM)

    a lovingly written oldest love poem with such rich imagery. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, March 16, 2009

Poem Edited: Friday, October 30, 2009


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