# The Oldest Love Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

# The Oldest Love

Rating: 5.0

my first love poem
happens to be the world's oldest one
the seashore wind and the tree in the shore
the wind and the tree
the shameless lovers for ages...for
they have a friend to watch over
the sea wave the friend would push over
her friend the wind to the tree..and with a glee
will flee back..when the two become one
the naughty and the innocent girl she is..the sea wave will come forth
again to watch over
and again with a glee will flee back
this love happens to be the oldest one
my fist love poem

Sonya Florentino 18 October 2009

haha! ....love is everywhere!

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Rachel Butler 12 October 2009

will flee back..when the two become one Rachel Ann Butler

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Raymond Rivera 10 October 2009

I love how you write because it is complicated the first couple of times through, and then it just clicks in the head. A trait that always eludes me in my own personal writing... The way you compare the wave to a naughty female is classic. It is profound and maybe, if you look at it right, a little bit humorous... Another poem to ponder on when I am just sitting around with my token female friend. Thank you.

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Nalini Hebbar 10 October 2009

nice...very nice...the tree the waves and the sea...wonderful story

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Anand Madhukar 07 October 2009

A very vivid imagery and an exquisite imagination make this poem a delight to read.10.

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Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty 17 November 2009

Love and romance with Nature and She knows how to up-pull these elements of love in poet’s psyche Ten. dr. sakti Cordially invite to my page [poem] read / comment and…. ds

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Emu Getachew 31 October 2009

Sublime piece full of imaginary twist...

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Swatimalya Chattopadhyay 25 October 2009

Eternal love is among the gifts of nature, e.g.wind and tree, tree and sea etc.They make their love obvious, oblivious of the privacies.BRILLIANT IDEA.

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Akram Saqib 25 October 2009

firrst love can not be forgeteed

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Lillian Thomas 24 October 2009

original images put in a dramatic scene. Thank you for sharing.

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