# The Oldest Love Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

# The Oldest Love

Rating: 5.0

my first love poem
happens to be the world's oldest one
the seashore wind and the tree in the shore
the wind and the tree
the shameless lovers for ages...for
they have a friend to watch over
the sea wave the friend would push over
her friend the wind to the tree..and with a glee
will flee back..when the two become one
the naughty and the innocent girl she is..the sea wave will come forth
again to watch over
and again with a glee will flee back
this love happens to be the oldest one
my fist love poem

Kranthi Pothineni 27 September 2009

The old love poem is crafted carefully and thoughtfully. Nice composition.

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Marieta Maglas 28 September 2009

wonderful lyric symbolistic poem, very wise written, thank you for sharing.......10+++++++++

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Patti Masterman 28 September 2009

How lovely is this; just proves again, that to take the most simplest of humble things, you can elevate them without limit, by merely writing about nature as it takes it's daily course. Love everything about this..cheers, Patti

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Patrick A. Martin 29 September 2009

Really nice imagery and use of a natural event to explain an emo experience.

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Vidi Writes 05 October 2009

To be frank.... In love there is nothing OLD Everything is GOLD So you may call it a golden era Your fist love poem...drives away the October cold to shine like a gold.

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Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty 17 November 2009

Love and romance with Nature and She knows how to up-pull these elements of love in poet’s psyche Ten. dr. sakti Cordially invite to my page [poem] read / comment and…. ds

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Emu Getachew 31 October 2009

Sublime piece full of imaginary twist...

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Swatimalya Chattopadhyay 25 October 2009

Eternal love is among the gifts of nature, e.g.wind and tree, tree and sea etc.They make their love obvious, oblivious of the privacies.BRILLIANT IDEA.

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Akram Saqib 25 October 2009

firrst love can not be forgeteed

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Lillian Thomas 24 October 2009

original images put in a dramatic scene. Thank you for sharing.

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