# A Finger's Touch On Me - [in Top 500] Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan
# A Finger's Touch On Me - [in Top 500]
in those days
as cavemen..man feared
the rumble and tumble in the sky
the lightning and thunder
he thought was god's wrath
the god's are at war he would say
today they say
the lightning and thunder
the commotion up there
is a reflection of humans depression
it gathers from each small one
to make it big on the sky
whatever may be the truth is...
the lovely rain after all this
definitely is his caress
a lovely hug from him it is
every tiny dropp of rain is his
fingers touch on me
Well presented....I have felt that touch! I love the lightning & thunder inspite of their destructive potential. Everytime I hear a thunder, I run on to the terrace to see the next lightning flash. During my childhood, I believed them to be independent events, lightening as a flash from God's camera & thunder as devil's laughter!
very well writtne sir.... u r such a creative salute to ur creativity.
well conceived thought...it may be a folklore however the thunder represent cleaning of some sort. thanks 10
A THOUGHTFUL POEM! I WOULD LIKE TO ADD, -'WE FEEL THE GENTLE CARESS OF GOD THROUGH HIS RAIN DROPS, THE COOL BREEZE AND FROM THE RADIATING WARMTH OF THE DISTANT SUN! THESE ARE ONLY A FEW OF HIS GIFTS WHICH WE ALL TAKE FOR GRANTED! ' For your poem 10! -Raj
Very well penned, great meaningful poem, you got it, keep it up, you got my vote,10+++, Love and Peace...
You have neatly changed the meaning of rain in the poem. Very well written. 10.
The sentiments you express here are just fantastic and the philosphy embedded here is exquisite. mandara
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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10/13/2024 5:06:39 AM # 1.0.0
A lovely piece, especially the last line, full of deep thoughts, great! ! 10+++