Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

# A Finger's Touch On Me - [in Top 500]

in those days
as cavemen..man feared
the rumble and tumble in the sky
the lightning and thunder
he thought was god's wrath
the god's are at war he would say

today they say
the lightning and thunder
the commotion up there
is a reflection of humans depression
it gathers from each small one
to make it big on the sky

whatever may be the truth is...
the lovely rain after all this
definitely is his caress
a lovely hug from him it is
every tiny dropp of rain is his
fingers touch on me

Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 14, 2009
Poem Edited: Monday, August 10, 2009

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  • Raj Nandy (12/31/2009 7:16:00 AM)

    A THOUGHTFUL POEM! I WOULD LIKE TO ADD, -'WE FEEL THE GENTLE CARESS OF GOD THROUGH HIS RAIN DROPS, THE COOL BREEZE AND FROM THE RADIATING WARMTH OF THE DISTANT SUN! THESE ARE ONLY A FEW OF HIS GIFTS WHICH WE ALL TAKE FOR GRANTED! '
    For your poem 10!
    -Raj

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  • Sasidharan Vellat MenonSasidharan Vellat Menon (12/29/2009 7:26:00 AM)

    Simply beautiful. Keep it up

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  • Romeo Della ValleRomeo Della Valle (12/26/2009 6:42:00 PM)

    Very well penned, great meaningful poem, you got it, keep it up, you got my vote,10+++, Love and Peace...

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  • Rahul Aithal (12/18/2009 7:42:00 AM)

    You have neatly changed the meaning of rain in the poem. Very well written.

    10.

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  • Mandara Pookal (11/21/2009 9:28:00 PM)

    The sentiments you express here are just fantastic and the philosphy embedded here is exquisite. mandara

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  • Seema(Aanamika) 80 (10/29/2009 8:37:00 AM)

    A lovely piece, especially the last line, full of deep thoughts, great! ! 10+++

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  • Rajkumar MukherjeeRajkumar Mukherjee (10/27/2009 1:15:00 PM)

    Dear Samanyan,
    Thanks for your invite to comment upon your poem 'a finger's touch on me'. It 's a lovely poem from a lover of nature. The rain drops brings solace to the earth and her inhabitants in so many ways.
    Only one clitch, a typo 'dropp' should be 'drop' in last but one line.
    Rated high.
    Please read my poems 'cuckoo', 'forgive', 'Japanese girl', 'contradiction ' and 'cyclical'. your comments with rating will be highly appreciated.
    Rajkumar

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  • Sarvesh Kulkarni (10/26/2009 2:16:00 AM)

    yes, very true.
    simple and precise.
    very eloquent.
    thank you.

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  • Milena Veleva (10/25/2009 9:30:00 AM)

    Congratulations, Samanyan! I like it a lot, wonderfully expressed.

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  • Ramin ChamanRamin Chaman (10/24/2009 10:31:00 AM)

    Hi Samanyan

    It was a deep poem..and you are a deep thinker..too.....thanks..

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  • Emu Getachew (10/24/2009 10:28:00 AM)

    well conceived thought...it may be a folklore however the thunder represent cleaning of some sort. thanks 10

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  • Karanvir Kataria (10/20/2009 11:21:00 AM)

    very well writtne sir....
    u r such a creative
    salute to ur creativity.

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  • Howard The Motivational Poet SimonHoward The Motivational Poet Simon (10/19/2009 2:01:00 PM)

    Very beautiful. Thanks for sharing.

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  • Ranjit Ravindran (10/18/2009 10:16:00 PM)

    Well presented....I have felt that touch!

    I love the lightning & thunder inspite of their destructive potential. Everytime I hear a thunder, I run on to the terrace to see the next lightning flash. During my childhood, I believed them to be independent events, lightening as a flash from God's camera & thunder as devil's laughter!

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  • Shubhangini Pandey (10/18/2009 11:29:00 AM)

    Thank u on behalf of the world for this beautiful poem

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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjrFrank James Ryan Jr...fjr (10/17/2009 10:43:00 PM)

    As was written by St. John The Evangelist in his ''Book of Revelation'', the Beast will come first and will rule the earth...from east to west, shore to shore it will wreak chaos & havoc in anathemaic measure....Yet, so long as the Toiuch of God be upon us...no infinite harm be dealt on us....Solid craftsmanship...Keep that pen pumping!

    F j R

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  • Gold Fish (10/17/2009 2:11:00 AM)

    Some phenomena are difficult to explain, but regardless of why things occur God has indeed created All Things and his Ways are Much Higher than Ours as are his Thoughts. Nonetheless, rain is a beautiful gift that is created and given by God. Contemplating and Reflective poem. Thanks for sharing.

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  • Obinna Eruchie (10/15/2009 10:09:00 AM)

    'the lightning and thunder / the commotion up there / is a reflection of humans depression...' sounds true.

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  • Swatimalya Chattopadhyay (10/10/2009 11:39:00 AM)

    God's fond touch makes things happen.Nature is the gift of Almighty.By his magic wand God controls scorching heat, thunderfall, shower --everything.Very significant and touching poem.CONGRATS ON ITS BEING BEST 500 POEMS.

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  • AtreyaSarma Uppaluri (10/9/2009 5:21:00 PM)

    The gifts of nature are the gifts from the divine. As such even a dropp of rain, a whiff of breeze, a ray of the sun, a sprout from the earth … are the greetings … handshakes … comforts … and hugs from that divine. Nice observation, beautiful ideas, sweet expression. # 10.

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