A Weight Of Too Much Poem by James Urwin

A Weight Of Too Much

Rating: 4.3
 


All I see.... is a monstrosity,
standing right before me.

Ripples of fat,
hair that needs a hat,
and an ass...thats for too long been sat.

Chunky cheeks made of blubber,
if I was a drawing, I would use a rubber(eraser) .

In this mirror...all I see,
is some fat guy...looking at me.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Due to illness, I have gained weight and do like what I see.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lyn Pendleton 20 February 2013

I like this one alot. it's cool how a short poem can convey so much sometimes. I can't help but think of Ignatious J. Reilly while reading. very good poem

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Paul Brookes 31 December 2012

Very moving, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , ,

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