Reasoned fair and forthright,
What if ‘hind words wise there be child's mind?
Let the old aught it well its worth find,
Fine, no sun shines at night,
Enough is an old lamp's limping light.
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Words well said | 43.11.14 |
Sir poetry is normally 16 plus minus lines else these become statements /QUOTATIONS you are a wonder poet of PH may we beseech thee
Poems are of 16 lines or so...But this one is only of five lines. And that still makes me a wonder poet! ! And you beseech me for what? No need. Just ask.
Fine, no sun shines at night, Enough is an old lamp's limping light.......so captivating with lofty heme. Beautiful poem.
You have zeroed in on the right lines, dear KM, thank you for beautiful feedback.
Quite simple and beautiful, Thanks a lot for sharing sir.
Most simple are more difficult and hence often are beautiful. Thanks for reading and appreciating. Welcome to my poems.
I always explore wisdom in most of your works sir even in Limericks! An excellent work.....................10
'A wise word from where so' quite applies to you as well, thanks Dr Swain.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wisdom! ! ! With the worth of the truth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Yes, wisdom from where so, thanks for reading and commenting dear Edward Louis.