Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 438,627 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

A You Take Care - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

You take care” some kind words from her mouth
Lady belonged to far off place from the direction of south
She was in rage and wanted the friendship to end
It was totally unacceptable for me to forgo her as friend

We were together for quite number of years
Her sweet voice created melody in my ears
I always wanted her voice to be heard in morning
She exactly did the same with the start of day and in and evening

Very nice and durable relation one can always be prod off
I used o forget the shots while playing the gold
Her face used to emerge whenever I had little time to relax
Her innocence ruled on me and there was no angle from point of sex

She may interrupt and correct me in every walk
She may remind me to do more with less talk
Her accurate pin pointing led me to be dependant
I used to behave very normal and forgot to be an adamant

It was her style of mixing with strangers
She was used to have beatings with angers
She did it with all innocence in the mind
You can have no parallel for such things to find

I could believe my ears with her remark
Was she on her way out or going to embark?
On a new mission with my complete exclusion
Or was there any new entry from others as intrusion

It was neither a joke nor simple talk
She had decided to exit with simple walk
I was unable to decide what could be her next step?
Was it her natural out burst which had come in the form of slap?

Whatever may be the case it was her desire
To part with ways without indulging in satire
She always appreciated my work and admired
How could I tell her that she was very much required?

It may be intolerable and terrible for her to remain
In past also she had never thought of any loss or gain
She had only one aim to be with me as good companion
How come then set back took place for our union?


It may be with heavy heart that she might have taken the decision
I have no slight doubt about her logic with so much precision
I shall have to respect her wishes and ask nothing in return
May be possible she may change her decision in turn


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  • (4/23/2010 11:38:00 PM)


    of course this is nice..a well penned piece..hhhmmm, i am speechless... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 23, 2010



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