A Young Farewell Poem by Danzen D...

A Young Farewell



Those endless eyes I daily see
Those pretty eyes that set me free,
From bondage that, from darkness's blight,
That opened mine and gave me sight

The raindrops freeze, the sun streaks stop
And time has froze my own teardrop
Your eyes meet mine, with breath so warm
Your touch dismissed all ways of harm

You shine much bright than moonlight's beam
Your face and smile, so kind and seam
The moon and stars, to clouds they fade
Yet you near me, a kiss you laid

And all flared up, my heart, my life
My mind disposed my griefs, my strife
And time moved on, your lips in mine
And dance we go, no rules, no line

The sounds then fade, the steps then slow
Our grip goes loose, yet I bestow
On you a kiss, a young farewell
Leave you my heart, please love it well

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Julia Pascual 30 July 2009

you really know what to write, and how to write it.. good work! !

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Lorena Cruz 24 July 2009

simple movements to a simple observation to a really great poem..

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Nashy Lamen 19 July 2009

Your ideas were nicely expreesed.. I love the concept and flow of the poem.. You're rhyming again! .. It seems that you are greatly inspired by someone. Who might that be? ... *laugh* Just kidding.. Keep it up! ! .. c:

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