Abate. Poem by Maya Garza

Abate.

Rating: 5.0


Halt -
No crossroads here.
I could go back to where I couldn't pick.
To where signs were plentiful.
Choices, not so adamant.
The sordid simplicity of smitten smiles,
Serrated on marble.
Bernini's own, reduced to ashen marble graves,
Where not even the dead lie.
The booming sets off an inward cringe; the salty dew of sorrow.
The fog clouded view of a faraway park,
Where laughter sounds more like
Cackles.
The edge of my vision looms,
As well as my consciousness.

6/10/09

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 18 June 2009

Despair unabated...well, you convey your thoughts very beautifully there, Maya...flowing diction...the concluding lines are really captivating...thanks...10

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