Absent Vision Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Absent Vision

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Absent vision

It is sharp eye
And with full try
In position to pick
Even smallest stick

The small fishes may run
Or hide in water with fun
But bird may pick without noise
It has enough room with choice

It is concentration
That helps to add an orientation
The target is seen clear
The hunt is on sans fear

It may be mud or water
But main thing is hunger
That is taken care of
The bird can make last laugh

People complain of an opportunity
That has eluded them in the vicinity
But actual thing is different
The true vision is absolutely absent

Absent Vision
Monday, April 10, 2017
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 April 2017

It is sharp eye And with full try

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Savita Tyagi 10 April 2017

Excellent poem. Having concentration and clear vision for goal are most important. Thank you for sharing such a wonderful poem.

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so kind of you for having read and encouraging

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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