Saturday, May 29, 2010

Abyss Comments

Rating: 2.8

Each new blow
Is felt with a new pain
A new sting
Eating away at my heart
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Christina Shischell
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Susan Williams 18 November 2015

Like I hardly am real I envision All this flesh Falling, dripping, peeling Revealing nothing But a feeling. - - - good wording

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Fubara Benstowe 02 June 2010

The things you taught me about myself, makes me even afraid to see my own reflection, thats a nice, creative line, i love the insight, keep it up.

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to feel the chance potential to choose be reborn into a stronger more focused being 10+

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