Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 385,133 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Accomplishment - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

If you were failure
Then make sure
That from now onward
You got to be heard

Not with firmly spoken words
But with action and deeds
So far you were not taken seriously
But from now onward, you shall be spotted continuously

Whole of life’s work was unrewarded
Always neglected and downgraded
That compels someone to go for an immediate correction
But that drives you desperate with roe questions

The sun was at peak
But life did not pick
With suitable place
You were pushed out of race

You need not worry
And carry forward
The mission
And prove it was an accomplished admission

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Comments about Accomplishment by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/22/2015 9:41:00 AM)


    Very strong worded poem with a equally strong message
    The sun was at peak
    But life did not pick
    With suitable place
    You were pushed out of race
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/22/2015 9:25:00 AM)


    You need not worry
    And carry forward
    The mission
    And prove it was an accomplished admission
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 22, 2015



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