Deepak Amembal

Acid Rain - Poem by Deepak Amembal

From true rain
Drought floats, beyond
The fire cloud,
To patiently stay,
Than end, with
Tingling lights.

Comments about Acid Rain by Deepak Amembal

  • (5/30/2009 4:29:00 AM)

    imaginative write...thanks...10 (Report) Reply

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  • Nasra Al Adawi (2/22/2005 8:28:00 AM)

    Very touching touching (Report) Reply

  • (2/9/2005 1:49:00 PM)

    Excellent imagery. Very well done.

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  • (2/5/2005 7:10:00 AM)

    Great little image, and I loved the title. Really works. Thank you. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 4, 2005

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