Miguel Maria

Rookie - 0 Points (Nov.21,1993)

Acquiring New Love(S) ? - Poem by Miguel Maria

I found a flower of love
Beauty surrounds the plant
w/ precious petals of sweet embrace nipping on my nostrils
Lingering smells drive me on to follow this migrating blossomer
Ooo this plant of beauty this plant of mine
Like clockwork there are others in the pursuit of the plant
Sadly ones that could match this flowers beauty
I started losing hope losing drive then feeling
As I try to comprehend how much time I wasted
I notice another flower and as I follow this new plant I figure out a secret
A weed in flowers petals a pest or attention garnering annoyance to life
I go the other way and it follows me
Enough Is enough love is isn’t worth the strife

Comments about Acquiring New Love(S) ? by Miguel Maria

  • Melanie Williams (10/4/2008 12:23:00 AM)

    intrasting. i like it (Report) Reply

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  • (9/1/2008 1:30:00 PM)

    I love the fact that you're so young and able to express you feeling and thoughts so exquisitely.. good job.. keep it up. (Report) Reply

  • Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (9/1/2008 9:55:00 AM)

    it's evolved in human nature's most awkward presentation of naturalities of living....compromising, sacrificing and garnering of love... were juz like an untold stories......without 'The End'. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 1, 2008

Poem Edited: Thursday, October 29, 2009

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